Work-in-Progress

What if I opened my heart
With both hands

And offered to let you read my soul?

Would you?

Not a jacket blurb
Or polished introduction

But the un-proofed,
Unedited

Work-in-progress?
Me splayed across the page

Every word

Printed
For you to read.

Would you?

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20 thoughts on “Work-in-Progress

  1. Sharon O

    Excellent question… it is hard to b ‘real’… and bare our souls, spirits and selves with others. It brings a new name to vulnerability.

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  2. smiles… i’m not quite sure if i would be ready for the unedited version of my soul myself.. needs much trust to open up to someone completely.. and for the other a bit of courage to read as well…

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  3. I would certainly read yours and would love every word. So glad you didn’t ask if I would let anyone else read me–that’s a tougher question and harder to do. But you’ve got me thinking and that’s really…good. Thank you Cindee.

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  4. jodyo70

    yes, yes, yes–a work in progress. Aren’t we all? And there’s grace for each new day.
    nice to ‘meet’ you, Cindee. Maybe some day?

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